News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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Nowadays pictures accompany news stories on TV and in

newspapers

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the newspapers

very often. Some people believe that these pictures are more effective than words. I completely agree with

this

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statement.

Firstly

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, the pictures

make

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makes

the news more memorable.

For example

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details of accidents provided by pictorial illustrations make

audience

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the audience

audiences

more clear about the faults that has occurred and led to

fatality

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fatalities

a fatality

This

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is because images are retained by people for

longer time

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a long time

long time

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this

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will lead to more social awareness and can prevent future similar news to happen. As a consequence, people will try to avoid having accidents.

Secondly

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, due to pictures the people get clear conveying news.

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, for every health

programs

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program

Word Count

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A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

214 words

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empathize
instantaneous comprehension
irrefutable evidence
transcend language barriers
overreliance
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misinformation
desensitizing
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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisement? What measures can be taken to protect them?

SOME PEOPLE THINK YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD BE FREE TO CHOOSE HIS OR HER JOB, BUT OTHERS THINK THEY SHOULD BE REALISTIC AND THINK MORE ABOUT THEIR FUTURE. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion including relevant examples.

Describe a difficult task that you completed at work/study that you felt proud of. You should say: what the task was how you completed it why the task was difficult why you were proud of the completion of the task