Recently you issued a cheque to someone, but when that person presented the cheque to the bank, it was returned with these words ‘Returned for lack of sufficient funds”. You are sure that there is sufficient balance in your account. -Write a letter to the bank manager. In your letter, -give him particulars about your cheque -tell him that the cheque has bounced for no valid reason -request him to look into the matter

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter regarding my cheque that was returned for an invalid reason. I received a phone call from my friend and he mentioned to me that my cheque was unable to use

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the lack of sufficient funds.

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week , I deposited $ 3000 to my business account at your branch and I received a confirmation letter through email. The amount that I wrote on the cheque was only $200 .I have not withdrawn any money after that. As far as I am concerned, if I have enough cash , I will be able to take out my money anytime . I would appreciate it if you could check with your staff. She is the one who is refusing to give money . I am so sorry to disturb you at

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time as

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is an urgent matter . My friend is transferring

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cash to her mom for her medications. I look forward to hearing from you . Yours faithfully , Sandi

sandimyahla13Thu Apr 25 2024

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Coherence & Cohesion

Your letter is clear and well-structured, making good use of paragraphs to separate different points. You might enhance your letter by employing a wider range of sentence structures and vocabulary to convey your message with more sophistication.

Task Achievement

You've addressed all parts of the task effectively. For an even stronger response, you could provide the cheque number and date for clear reference, which would offer more specific information to assist the bank manager in resolving the issue.

Structure

The logical structure and progression of your letter are commendable; it's easy to follow your explanation and request.

Tone

You've maintained a polite and appropriate tone throughout the letter, which is highly suitable for the context of writing to a bank manager.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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