The graph below shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how elderly people in the United States spent their free
time
between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, an upward trend was experienced by watching tv, hiking, reading and surfing the internet, while
theater
showed a downward trend. Almost most of the Change the spelling
theatre
activites
had some fluctuations except for hiking.
In 1980, Correct your spelling
activities
popularity
of reading was slowly growing from 30% to 40% but from Add an article
the popularity
1990s
it went down even lower than it was before, anyway it became trendy again with its rapid jump in Change the article
the 1990s
2000s
. Hiking was slowly and steadily gaining Correct article usage
the 2000s
its
Correct pronoun usage
apply
popularity
from 1980 being popular among 20% only to 2010s when it became the most popular way of spending free time
. Theatre was the only activity losing its popularity
in 1980 but still it started gaining it again from 1990s
to Change the article
the 1990s
2000s
and slowly Correct article usage
the 2000s
moving
up after. TV was always Wrong verb form
moved
on
one of the highest positions, nearly 60% of people in Change preposition
in
1980s
spent their spare Correct article usage
the 1980s
time
watching the
TV and it reached 70% two decades later. But its Correct article usage
apply
popularity
dropped and is slowly moving down since the internet became trendy in 2000s
. Having lower than 10% Change the article
the 2000s
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
popularity
among elderly
till Correct article usage
the elderly
2000s
the level of people preferring Change the article
the 2000s
this
way of spending their free time
rapidly increased in 2000s
and is trending to move higher so it pretends to have one of the highest or even the highest rank among all activities listed before.Correct article usage
the 2000s
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