some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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TECHNOLOGY HAS MADE PEOPLE LIFE MORE EFFORTLESS.
HENCE
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, CERTAIN FOLKS CHOOSE TO BUY A FOOD STUFF FROM A STORE WHERE VARIETY OF FOOD AVAILABLE. WHERE AS ONLINE FOOD SHOPPING IS BECOMING MOST PREFERED APPROACH AMONG WOMEN NOWADAYS.
FIRSTLY
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,
THIS
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ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE IMPORTANT ADVANTAGE OF SUPERMARKET PURCHASING AND E-COMMERCE BUYING TECHNIQUE.
SECONDLY
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, STATE THE OPINION IN THE FAVOUR OF SUPEMARKET FOOD PURCHASING. ON THE ON HAND, SUPERMARKET FOOD CONSIDERED TO BE FRESH AND INDIVIDUAL HAS A OPTION TO LOOK PROPERLY AND BUY THE FOOD
AS A RESULT
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, PEOPLE HAVE FREEDOM OF CHOOSING THE VARIETIES OF FOOD.
HENCE
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, THERE ARE LESS CHANCE OF GETING EXPIRED PRODUCTS WHICH IS NOT CONSIDERED TO USE
FURTHER
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.
FOR EXAMPLE
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, INDIAN MARKET SURVEY FROM A VILLAGES REVEALED THAT 80 % OF VILLAGE CIVILIAN EATING FRESH FOOD EVERYDAY DUE TO ENORMOUS DIVERSITY.
HOWEVER
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IT DOES REQUIRED A WALKING EFFORT BY PEOPLE WHICH IS HARD FOR TODAY'S INDIVIDUAL TO DO BECAUSE OF THE LASYNESS.
ON THE OTHER HAND
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, E-COMMERCE WILL REDUCED THE EFFORT OF WALKING AND MADE AN EASY SHOPPING EXPERIENCE
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MUCH NEEDED IN THE BUSY LIFE WHERE FOLKS DO NOT HAVE ENOUGH TIME FOR HOUSEHOLD CHORES.
THEREFORE
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, THE NEW SYSTEM MAKE PEOPLE FREE OF EVERYDAY TENSION AND ALLOWS THE TO OPT FOR THE ESSENTIAL PROFESSIONAL WORKS.
FOR INSTANCE
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, ONE IN THE SUBARB AREAS, 90% OF CIVILIAN PREFERED TO PURCHASE THEIR THE EATING PRODUCTS FROM ONLINE STORE WHICH HAS A FACILITY OF DOOR TO DOOR ORDER DELIVERY. THE REASON IS
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SAVES THEIR TIME TO GO FOR PURCHASING. AFTER ALL THE DISCUSSION ABOVE, I BELIEVE, THE BEST METHOD IS THE SUPERMARKET GROCERY AS IT
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PROVIDE THE WELLNESS ACTIVITY AND FROM ONLINE GROCERY HAS A MORE DANGERS
SUCH
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AS FRAUD AND CHEATING CUSTOMER AND SO ON. IN CONCLUSION, BOTH THE METHOD INDEED SATISFY THE NEEDS OF AN INDIVIDUALS THOUGH ONE SHOULD NEVER IGNORE THE CONSEQUENCE OF BUYING FOOD THROUGH E-COMMERCE. IF, ONLINE GROCERY STORES HAVE SOME VEGOROUS RULES AND REGULATION
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SURLY IT CAN BE THE BEST METHOD IN THE NEAR FUTURE.
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