Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the
competition
between students are becoming natural because of some of the educational institutions and the parents. There were mixed opinions about the competition
between students. The healthy competition
leads to a good career. However
, the high competition
in education creates the problems to
their life as well. In Suggestion
in
with
this
essay, I will explain my opinion about both the healthy and unhealthy competition
based on my knowledge.
The positive side of the competition
makes the students grow faster in the knowledge.In this
approach, they can learn the subjects by co-operating with each other. When students start learning in this
way, then
they have more learning scope from others. For example
, Pair programming was introduced recently in the software development.I am also
part of that in my last
project.When I was developing with my friend I am very sure I have learned new things from my colleague as well as my friend also
the same.
Coming to the other side of this
, There were more incidents happened in the schools because of the competition
between the schools not between the students. In this
digital world, the parents and the institutions forced their children to participate in multiple aspects without their interest. With the lack of interest students are not able to offend the competition
and it leads to suicides. Likewise
, In India some of the survey's noticed that most of the students are not able to concentrate on their interested subjects due to the competition
with outside the world.
In conclusion, The parents have to take inputs from their children on what they want? And encourage them to move further
on wanted things. And the institutions also
motivate children and give suggestions to handle the competition
, then
even though they have lots of pressure with competition
they will survive and continue further
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