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Some people believe it is better to study subjects that have practical applications. Others, however think it is better to study subjects that are theoretical. Discuss both views

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There are different ways of learning in school. Most people believe that the practical style of studying is beneficial while others think the theoretical pattern is better.
This
 essay will discuss both views.
Firstly
, getting to do
stuffs
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stuff
 yourself makes one knows it easily.
This
 way is very important and can make
learn
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learning
 fast without forgetting. A good example
are
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is
 the software programming students, where is required for them to get their hands moving in typing neat lines of codes.
This
 means can make students explore their talents without limitations.
Secondly
, while others think the theoretical styles are better, it can make one read without proper application to knowing how its been done reals life.
This
 kind of methods are good at the
peripeheral
on or near an edge or constituting an outer boundary; the outer area
peripheral
 phase that will
aloow
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
allow
 students know what they are getting into before going
indebt
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in debt
.
For instance
, most computer science
students especiall
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students, especially
students especially
 those that are learning programming will find the skill language difficult
.
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.
On
an other hand
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the other hand
other hand
another hand
,
such
 kind of students find it difficult in getting
job
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a job
 after
gradution
the successful completion of a program of study
graduation
graduating
. A colleague that we graduated almost at the same time is yet to get a job because most companies are looking for those that already have a knowledge of the
market
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marketing
 industry. In conclusion,
this
 essay discussed both views. In as much as it is necessary to go through the theoretical style, it is most important to practice as
this
 will help students find jobs on time or even open a business that she
coud
requests polite permission
could
 teach others or rather establish herself and empower others

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