Environmental problems such as pollution and Climate variation are increasing nowadays. The government have taken some measures at a global level. But they only gets you solutions. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved?

Nowadays, Atmosphere issues are common in every country
such
as
pollution
and
climate
change are rapidly grown up while, The
government
has duties to take some crucial decisions for the Intercontinental. There are many hurdles of
this
matter as well as number of remedies.
Pollution
, meanwhile, introduced by local people in many countries. People who habit to throw a rubbish here and there.
For example
, Persons who always eat chocolate and wrapper of it throws away to the road and anywhere else.
However
, In some native land
government
decided the penalty for throwing garbage and
also
have to declare fine. It is a minor crime in many states, but still
pollution
is increasing day by day. It is the responsibility of Management for Awareness of people. It is a matter of countries development. So
government
should create seminar to the people's awareness.
Pollution
is directly affected by the
climate
Drought, flood and rising sea level are common problems in every country. Though people who responsible for it
,
Accept space
,
They have no idea what type of mistake they have done.
However
, after the
climate
humanity who suffered from the
climate
they have right to take funds from the insurance company or
government
.
Moreover
money is the not only way for developing of the nation, but countries owner has to create a major law for reducing
pollution
and try to control the
climate
change. The major solutions to
this
problem are-People should be encouraged by
government
.
For example
, Education person can understand the value of cleanliness and they could not create massive. Another reason is-Campaign in which join the people for avoiding
pollution
. Overall common persons are basic ladder for controlling
pollution
and manage
climate
while,
Government
also
generate rules book for the citizens.
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