Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Societies sometimes pose restrictions on the ways of expression, which not only makes it difficult to express what is in the mind of an artist.
Therefore
, some people think that artists should be given full
liberty
in order to represent themselves by the piece of art which they are
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addicted
in like painting,
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, like painting,
music. While some people contradict
this
by saying that it is against the laws of any country and nobody is allowed to do anything for which the country law don’t allow to do. I personally disagree with the former view and in
this
I will discuss
this
scenario based on the examples of Oxford University research and Time Magazine survey to demonstrate points and support claims.
Firstly
, those who are in favour of the idea that artists are allowed to do what they want to do, don’t investigate the social barriers in which our societies are bound.
Furthermore
, humanity teaches us to keep other humans happy and advocates of freedom of artist’s action forget that may be that one person can result in the grief and pain of all the
society
by its actions.
For example
, Oxford University in 2016 conducted a research on freedom of speech and found out that there is more violence in those countries which give
liberty
to
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of
speech. So, from
this
example, it is clear that artists have to respect the rights and beliefs of that region whom it is representing.
Secondly
, some people regard
liberty
as playing with the sentiments of other people.
This
kind of attitude is not only destructible for any
society especially if
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society, especially if
an artist
adopt
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adopts
this
way
.
Additionally
, it brings more happiness on the face of people if an artist
think
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thinks
for
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of
them and think like them.
Similarly
, s survey of Time Magazine in 2016 suggests that artists are the ambassadors of the
society
and they have to respect
this
title in a good
way
. So from
this
example, it is clear that artists are the representative of that culture and they have to do something to help their culture in a positive
way
. To conclude, artists have the right of expression and they have the
liberty
to express
it but
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it, but
there are social limits
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of
this
and artists have to respect
this
limit for the betterment of their
society
. In the future, if governments will impose strict laws for any violence recorded
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in
with
the name of speech, artists will perform in a better
way
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • creativity
  • freedom of expression
  • innovative
  • ethical considerations
  • societal morals
  • unregulated
  • provoke thought
  • controversy
  • government regulation
  • censorship
  • diverse perspectives
  • artistic expression
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