All over the world societies are facing growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adult. What are the reason for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Globally, the percentage increase of overweight children and adults has been a major concern in the society. Several issues

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caused

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increase.

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,

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believe some measures must be taken, in order to reduce

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diturbing

causing distress or worry or anxiety

disturbing

trend of

obesity

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. Children was well as adults nowadays consume too much of junks and other foods that contains fat, which is

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a major reason

the major reason

for adding too much weight. Engaging in enough

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is considered to be a waste of time, as many find themselves to be too lazy to have enough

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.

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, proper measures should be taken as what kind of foods should be consumed and why and when to consume

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food

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.

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, a woman in the United States gained above 300 pounds within two years, when asked why she has gained so much weight, she said her inability to control the amount of

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she eats per day is the major problem she is battling with.

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, people try as much as possible to engage in hard works which is a form of

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and prefer to be in a relaxed manner while working,

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in turn is

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a major problem

in the society an too much of relaxation

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leads to addition of weight.

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,

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incresing

becoming greater or larger

increasing

number of

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can be

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fought

against, if children and adults can control the amount of fat consumed each day, parents can can

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be of

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importance

in making sure the

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food

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food, food

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giving to their children does not contain too much fat and should fine time to monitor the kinds of junks their children buy in school.

Adults

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Adults, however

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, should ensure that they engage in enough

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, and try as much as possible to ignore too much pleasure during working hours. The gym

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an area that is approximately central within some larger region

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the proper place

to keep fit, and adults who work while seating for so long must

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make certain of

ensure

insure

they visit the gym

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an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

to burn

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from a particular thing or place or position

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any kinds of fat.

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, taking into consideration the device of doctors as regards

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will be

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a great idea

, as those who battle with

obesity

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should endeavour to see

fitness doctore

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the fitness doctor

fitness doctor

fitness doctors

as to what kind of foods should be

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taken

at a proper time. In conclusion,

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believe the growing trend of

obesity

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can be dealt with, if the following

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is taken

into

consideratiion

the process of giving careful thought to something

consideration

: ability to control the amount fat beings consumed each day, and

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if proper and adequate

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is scheduled after long hours of work.