You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. What is the article about? What is the error? What you expect an editor to do?

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter in regards to the
article
that you have printed in your newspaper The Times of India on 8th December, 19 about the upcoming movie of Kiara Adwani. I would like to tell you that she is a very close friend of mine, and I know her personally since we were in school. In
this
article
, you have mentioned that her upcoming movie is “Kabir Singh 2”. I would like to tell you that her upcoming movie is “Good News” which is releasing
next
month. Though, the date of release of ‘Kabir Singh 2’ is not yet decided. I would like you to rectify
this
in your newspaper and give correct information to her fans and other film authorities by releasing a new
article
; so that it does not create any problem for her in the near future. I hope to see your rectified
article
soon. Thank You Yours sincerely Vaishali
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