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The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five years period.

The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five years period.
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The bar chart compares the amount of
money
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in on
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 five leisure activities
such
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 as Cinema, Video, Music, Publishing, and Television in three areas of the world between 1995 and 2000. In general, the highest amount of
money
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expended
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was expended
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 on entertainment facilities in the
USA
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, and the least
spent
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was spent
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 in
Asia
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 over 5 years period. Now turning to the details, in 1995, 184
billion
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 dollars went to five types of pleasure schemes by the
USA
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,
while
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Asia
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 was 50% far lower,
accounted
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 for 67
billion
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 only; Europe held 97
billion
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 of total expenses. It can be seen that, after 1995, all the territories experienced an increase in total expenses for all recreation until 2000. In 2000, much more
money
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wasted
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was wasted
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 by the
USA
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 compared to
Asia
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 and Europe, which was showed 257
billion
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.
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, the most popular activities were publishing and television in all provinces, whilst the less popular one was the Cinema for a period of 5 years. Nearly as much
money
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spent
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was spent
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 on television as publishing from 1995 to 2000. A similar amount of expenditure
made
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was made
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 on Music by the
USA
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,
Asia
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 and Europe over the period. The expenses remained the same in the cinema between 1995 and 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, usa, asia, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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