The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five years period.

The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five years period.
The bar chart compares the amount of
money
put
in on
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five leisure activities
such
as Cinema, Video, Music, Publishing, and Television in three areas of the world between 1995 and 2000. In general, the highest amount of
money
expended
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was expended
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on entertainment facilities in the
USA
, and the least
spent
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in
Asia
over 5 years period. Now turning to the details, in 1995, 184
billion
dollars went to five types of pleasure schemes by the
USA
,
while
Asia
was 50% far lower,
accounted
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for 67
billion
only; Europe held 97
billion
of total expenses. It can be seen that, after 1995, all the territories experienced an increase in total expenses for all recreation until 2000. In 2000, much more
money
wasted
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by the
USA
compared to
Asia
and Europe, which was showed 257
billion
.
On the contrary
, the most popular activities were publishing and television in all provinces, whilst the less popular one was the Cinema for a period of 5 years. Nearly as much
money
spent
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on television as publishing from 1995 to 2000. A similar amount of expenditure
made
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was made
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on Music by the
USA
,
Asia
and Europe over the period. The expenses remained the same in the cinema between 1995 and 2000.

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