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Some educational systems are now focusing on the teaching of practical skills to high school students, rather than theoretical knowledge. What is the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

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school
student
 focus on practical
knowledge
 compared to
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concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
vertical
knowledge
. Most of the
school
 emphases on practical
knowledge
 than
theretical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
knowledge
.
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an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
 will discuss about
advantages
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the advantages
 and disadvantages of practical
knowledge
. Many
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schools
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accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
 in providing
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concerned with actual use or practice
practical
 understanding
to
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of
 their
student
. They believe having practical
knowledge
 is very important in
student
 life
,
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help
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the help
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knowledge, it
knowledge it
 help
student
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students
the student
a student
 to focus on studies and they learn in
better way
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a better way
.
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The school
have completely changed
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has completely changed
 the way of teaching where they have introduced labs and
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systematic investigation to establish facts
research
 for practical understanding along with that it help to
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make by combining materials and parts
build
student
 attention
.
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.
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student
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students
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 to learn and give them platform to have
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hands on
 experience. But there are some
school
 which still
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accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
 traditional learning is the best way to teach
student
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students
the student
a student
. They focus on
thereotical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
knowledge
 rather than practical
knowledge
. They believe in books and content rather than labs and research.

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