The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
percentage
of four different materials
, which are paper
and cardboards
, glass containers, Aluminum Fix the agreement mistake
cardboard
cans
and plastics, that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a specific country.
Overall
, the recycling of paper
and cardboards
has the highest Fix the agreement mistake
cardboard
percentage
of the four materials
, followed by glass containers. However
, there is a noticeable drop in 1988 both of them. On the other hand
, plastics is
the least material that was recycled between 1982 and 2010, followed by Aluminum Change the verb form
are
cans
, which may suggest that recycling these materials
is the hardest and the most complicated.
The recycling of paper
and cardboards
made up Fix the agreement mistake
cardboard
to
65% of the Change preposition
apply
overall
recycling products, Moreover
, it reached its maximum of 80% in 1992, even
though it dropped again to reach 70% in 2008, it still holds the highest Correct word choice
and even
percentage
of the four materials
. Glass containers hold the second
place with approximately 50% in 1982.
While
both paper
and Almunium cans
had a percentage
of almost 0% in 1986, the proportion of Aluminum cans
increased consistently to reach 55% in 2008. Meanwhile, the percentage
of recycled paper
increased slightly to reach only 10% in 2008.Submitted by ewaida.alaa on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, materials, paper, cans with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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