The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
percentage
of four different
materials
, which are
paper
and
cardboards
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cardboard
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, glass containers, Aluminum
cans
and plastics, that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a specific country.
Overall
, the recycling of
paper
and
cardboards
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has the highest
percentage
of the four
materials
, followed by glass containers.
However
, there is a noticeable drop in 1988 both of them.
On the other hand
, plastics
is
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the least material that was recycled between 1982 and 2010, followed by Aluminum
cans
, which may suggest that recycling these
materials
is the hardest and the most complicated. The recycling of
paper
and
cardboards
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made up
to
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65% of the
overall
recycling products,
Moreover
, it reached its maximum of 80% in 1992,
even
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though it dropped again to reach 70% in 2008, it still holds the highest
percentage
of the four
materials
. Glass containers hold the
second
place with approximately 50% in 1982.
While
both
paper
and Almunium
cans
had a
percentage
of almost 0% in 1986, the proportion of Aluminum
cans
increased consistently to reach 55% in 2008. Meanwhile, the
percentage
of recycled
paper
increased slightly to reach only 10% in 2008.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, materials, paper, cans with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.

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