Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The most effective method to resolve

environmental problem

Suggestion

the environmental problem

environmental problems

is to increase the price of fuel used by

automotives

Suggestion

automobiles

automotive

This

essay

disagee

Suggestion

disagrees

disagree

with view point as there are many other factors like

industrilazation

the development of industry on an extensive scale

industrialization

and deforestation are the important factor for harming nature.

First

of all, due to

industrilazation many

Accept comma addition

industrialization, many

industrialization many

industrialisation many

industires

the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise

industries

and factories

are exhausting

Suggestion

is exhausting

harmfull

causing or capable of causing harm

harmful

gases in the air.

This

Suggestion

These

gases are untreated and contain hazardous particles which causes air pollution,

this

smoke is not only affecting humans but birds and animals

also

For

instance in

Accept comma addition

instance, in

Delhi capital of India every year estimated 1.2

lakhs

people are killed due to air

pollution according

Accept comma addition

pollution, according

to WHO reason reason for

this

is the chemical factories located in

outskirts

Suggestion

the outskirts

of the city.

Rising

Suggestion

Raising

the cost of petrol will surely be of a help but

government

Suggestion

the government

should regulate the smoke released by manufacturing companies.

Secondly

, cutting of trees and

buring

concealing something under the ground

burying

burning

of plants has

detrimental effect

Suggestion

a detrimental effect

detrimental effects

on the mother earth. Trees are destroyed for building houses, furniture and sometimes for commercial purpose. Due to

this

wildlife is killed along with

problem

Suggestion

problems

a problem

like global warming and soil erosion. Loss of the

rain forests

a forest with heavy annual rainfall

rainforests

has resulted in warmer and drier climates near the tropics, according to

NASA which

Accept comma addition

NASA, which

has not only destroyed ecosystems but

also

has

lead

Suggestion

led

exctint

the point or degree to which something extends

extent

of species of animal. In conclusion, putting taxes on the crude oil will

certain

Suggestion

certainly

benefit in

reducting

any process in which electrons are added to an atom or ion (as by removing oxygen or adding hydrogen); always occurs accompanied by oxidation of the reducing agent

reducing

in nature

contamination but

Accept comma addition

contamination, but

issue like having control on emission of fumes from industry and deforestation will have major part.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

248 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

environmental sustainability
renewable energy
fossil fuels
public transportation
carbon footprint
economic incentives
alternative energy vehicles
fuel-efficient
government subsidies
economic disparity
urban planning
rural infrastructure
sustainable development
carbon tax
green technology
demand elasticity
energy conservation
climate change mitigation

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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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