Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The most effective method to resolve
environmental problem
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the environmental problem
environmental problems
is to increase the price of fuel used by
automotives
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automobiles
automotive
.
This
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essay
disagee
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disagrees
disagree
with view point as there are many other factors like
industrilazation
the development of industry on an extensive scale
industrialization
and deforestation are the important factor for harming nature.
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of all, due to
industrilazation many
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industrialization, many
industrialization many
industrialisation many
industires
the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industries
and factories
are exhausting
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is exhausting
harmfull
causing or capable of causing harm
harmful
gases in the air.
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This
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These
gases are untreated and contain hazardous particles which causes air pollution,
this
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smoke is not only affecting humans but birds and animals
also
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.
For
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instance in
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instance, in
Delhi capital of India every year estimated 1.2
lakhs
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people are killed due to air
pollution according
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pollution, according
to WHO reason reason for
this
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is the chemical factories located in
outskirts
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the outskirts
of the city.
Rising
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Raising
the cost of petrol will surely be of a help but
government
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the government
should regulate the smoke released by manufacturing companies.
Secondly
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, cutting of trees and
buring
concealing something under the ground
burying
burning
of plants has
detrimental effect
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a detrimental effect
detrimental effects
on the mother earth. Trees are destroyed for building houses, furniture and sometimes for commercial purpose. Due to
this
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wildlife is killed along with
problem
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problems
a problem
like global warming and soil erosion. Loss of the
rain forests
a forest with heavy annual rainfall
rainforests
has resulted in warmer and drier climates near the tropics, according to
NASA which
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NASA, which
has not only destroyed ecosystems but
also
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has
lead
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led
in
exctint
the point or degree to which something extends
extent
of species of animal. In conclusion, putting taxes on the crude oil will
certain
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certainly
benefit in
reducting
any process in which electrons are added to an atom or ion (as by removing oxygen or adding hydrogen); always occurs accompanied by oxidation of the reducing agent
reducing
in nature
contamination but
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contamination, but
issue like having control on emission of fumes from industry and deforestation will have major part.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental sustainability
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • public transportation
  • carbon footprint
  • economic incentives
  • alternative energy vehicles
  • fuel-efficient
  • government subsidies
  • economic disparity
  • urban planning
  • rural infrastructure
  • sustainable development
  • carbon tax
  • green technology
  • demand elasticity
  • energy conservation
  • climate change mitigation
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