Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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People go through different phases of

life

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as childhood, adolescence, and

adulthood

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. And every phase has its own experience. While some people believe that the teenage phase is the most joyful, others argue that despite the greater duties

adulthood

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is more enjoyable. I tend to agree with the former argument. On the one hand,

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, many responsibilities on one's shoulders,

adulthood

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is the best period.

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is because of the independence earned

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of past practical knowledge and experiences.

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, people are absolutely free to take decisions of their lives.

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, they don't need anyone's permission, if they want to leave their job and start a business.

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, in teenage, people are dependent on their elders to take their

life

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decisions.

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, I would argue that teenage

life

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is more enjoyable. Due to less to none commitments, energy and motivation level of teenagers towards

life

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is at its peak.

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makes them

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fearful

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, the energy and determination of Mark Zukerberg convinced him to drop out from Harvard University and build a social network platform "Facebook" which is worth billions of dollars today.

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, an adult with several responsibilities of his/her shoulders would think many times before leaving his job to start his own company. In conclusion, in spite of the freedom to take decisions in adult

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, we must take into consideration the energy and fearlessness of teenage

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. In my view, I believe that people find adolescence much more joyful than

adulthood

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Topic Vocabulary:

adolescence
fulfillment
responsibilities
exploration
long-term goals
sense of stability
carefree
contentment
well-being
life stage
unique opportunities
deep satisfaction

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