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International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should therefore be restricted.

#air #travel #impact #environment
In the modern era, travelling to all parts of the world has become feasible and fast enough
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 Unlike the olden days where moving from source to destination took many months
thus
 people have named it as "voyage"
,
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,
 but as technology started to develop, modes of transport
also
 increased providing options for people for safe and sound journey. Among all the modes of transport, airways
seems
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seem
 to be the best and fastest way to commute across different places.
As a
result in
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result, in
 ease of travel and discounted offers has attracted numerous customers to make use of fights. Meanwhile
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 touring across different countries will be physically exhausting if done through waterways as it takes a long time to reach.
Inorder
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In order
 to reach from
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
end
 to the
opposit
being directly across from each other; facing
opposite
 part of the world, Airways hardly takes 24 hours with comfort food and sleep. But technology had proven both good and bad in many circumstances.
Although
 shipping causes more time, it does not necessarily harm the environment
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 yet flights release lots of toxic
gases
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gas
 while landing down and in motion. Owing to these gases results in the increase of
greenhouse effect
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the greenhouse effect
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Nowadays a lot of arguments and protests are going on due to result in
depetion
the act of decreasing something markedly
depletion
 of arctic
region which
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region, which
 will eventually pose a threat to human life on earth. Anything
that is
 used in a large level will seriously affect the environment if not controlled.
Therfore
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Therefore
, adequate measures should be taken before it starts to cause serious harm. Airways
has been
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had been
 one of the most used and efficient way of travel.

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