Your parents will be celebrating their 40th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable. Write to your best friend, Joan, who is a professional event planner. In your letter: explain why the occasion is special ask for her assistance set up a time to meet at your friend's convenience to discuss your plan

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Dear Joan, How have you been? You'll be glad to know that I am planning to throw a surprise party for my parents on their 40th wedding anniversary. I need your help in organising
this
event. They will complete their 40 years of togetherness on 10th December so I want to make
this
day memorable for them.
Additionally
,
Accept space
,
as you know my father is a police officer so we are thinking to invite all his known famous persons that would make him delighted.Old friends of them
also
will be invited to make it more special. You are a professional planner and have planned various
such
grand occasions. You
,
Accept space
,
therefore
,
is requested
Suggestion
are requested
to assist me in
this
party as only you can handle
such
a great event in an organisational way. Mike described how well you planned his reception party in
outdoors
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the outdoors
. Write me up if you have time
this
weekend. We will discuss about the costs, theme, menus and of course, venue of it. Write me soon! Liz

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