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In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negatives effects on society?

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Now a days people are very much interested to leave alone because of so many issues. Lets discuss about the causes of
this
, these times people are not happy
with the
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with, the
 relationships they have and even the recently married couples
also
 going
for
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to
 divorce
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 two to three months of time because of lack of freedom and privacy
.
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.
 And
also
 from the
last
 few
decades women
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decades, women
 were started working independently and choosing to stay alone to reach
teir
of them or themselves
their
there
 goals and ambitions in their life. The percentage of working women was
also
 hiked compared with previous times. Youth are not able to handling the stress and pressure arising due to the relationships.
this
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This
 is
also
 one of the
reason
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reasons
 for it. It has both
negitive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
 and positive impacts.
First
 we will go with
negitive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
 effects, being single decreases the confidence among them and increases the depression. In other ways it
also make
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also makes
 the people
to go
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go
 for
suiside
the act of killing yourself
suicide
suicidal
 attempts sometimes. These people
cant
can not
can't
 work with the group and team at the office
,
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,
they always prefer to work individually. In a positive way
,
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,
 it improves the knowledge and capacity to handle anything in life without
support
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the support
 of others.It helps in improving the skills and innovative thoughts and one can know about themselves if they are out of the gang.It
also
 helps in the growth of the country in a wider angle.
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