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Some people think that to learn a second language well it is necessary to live in the country where that language is spoken. What is your opinion about this?

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In
this
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 competitive era, multilingualism has become increasingly popular. It is believed that to master a foreign
language
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, residing in a
country
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 where the
language
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 is widely spoken is mandatory.
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, some people opt to learn a
second
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language
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 from school or the internet due to convenience and cost, living among the native speakers is absolutely necessary to be proficient in a
language
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.
This
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 essay will argue why it is imperative to learn a
language
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 in its
country
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 of origin. These days,
variety
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a variety
 of languages can be learnt successfully from any location. Foreign languages are being taught in schools by professionals,
also
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 people can take
on line
on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
 courses
on
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in
 any
language
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 of their choice. Even though these methods seem to be more convenient and cheaper, they are only theoretical and may not be
comprehensive
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comprehended
.
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, not being around the native speakers may hinder
regular practice
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the regular practice
 of the
language
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,
in addition
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, these methods may only ensure the basic vocabularies are learnt. These are the limitations to learning a
language
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 away from the
country
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 where it is spoken.
On the other hand
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, staying with people who speak a
language
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 often is essential to be fluent in the
language
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 as there will be regular interactions with the native speakers.
Also
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 timely feedback can be given for correction of
mistakes making
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mistakes, making
 learning faster and easier.
Furthermore
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, there is the benefit of knowing the history and culture behind the
language
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.
This
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 will help deepen the understanding of how the
language
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 originated. Most French tutors in my
country
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for instance
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, are required to spend at least a year in France to be qualified to teach French.
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, learning a
language
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 in
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
country
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 of origin definitely gives one an edge. In conclusion, though a
second
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language
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 can be learnt from the comfort of one's
country
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, proficiency may not be achieved. There is
therefore
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 the need to stay in a place where communication with the
language
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 is regular to be perfect in it.

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Your opinion

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