Some people believe that the death penalty can reduce crimes. Do you agree or disagree?

Capital punishment is often at the top of the agenda throughout the

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world, whether

it aids in restricting

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crime rate

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the crime rate

or not. I completely agree with

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notion not only because it saves a nation from re-offenders and terminate their

network

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with others, but

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gives a lesson to others.

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essay will explore how these factors justify the

death

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sentence as a way to control

crime

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.

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, many convicts

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commits

crimes after completing their sentences. Because of the lack of effective rehabilitation system in many nations, offenders are unable to secure a better place in the society, and often get back to their criminal world. Take an example of Yemen, where Abu Ramal, a Yemen rebel, was exonerated by the government, and he was the sole real for igniting a civil war.

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, hanging to

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is one a measure to control

offenses

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offences

.

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, dangerous criminals have a strong

network

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with their gangs behind the bars. As some corrupt officials allow incarcerated criminals to operate their

network

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from jail by giving access to electronic gadgets.

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fact can be better explained with an example of a peace process in Afghanistan, where the country head of Al-Qaida was involved in orchestrating many terrorist activities in Kabul from jail.

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,

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death punishment

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death, punishment

breaks the connection with other members and put

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bars

on

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criminal activities.

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, in order to curb the

crime

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rate,

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death punishment

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death, punishment

can be used as a tool to give a lesson to other convicts and the general public to refrain themselves from

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kind of activity and abide by the law.

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, the fear of

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in public is a must to control

crime

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. To sum up, the

death

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penalty is fully justified in decreasing the

crime

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rate in terms of giving a moral lesson to the public, stop re-

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convicted

and breaking the criminal

network

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.