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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

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It is true that due to cutting edge technology individuals use electronic gadgets like mobile phone as well as
computer
 which are very useful for their academic purposes. But it is believed by few masses that
computer
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the computer
 is becoming
negative trend
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a negative trend
the negative trend
 in
education sectors
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the education sectors
. I my opinion, it is
positive trend
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a positive trend
 for
improve
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improving
 the
children
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child
child's
 mentality as well as I discuss both view in upcoming paragraph
To begin
 with, there are many positive effects of
computer
 for children in
education department
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the education department
education departments
.
First
 and foremost is they can easily understand any difficult task and save their precious time. Apart from
this
computer
 plays
curial
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Curial
Cyril
 role in
education sectors
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the education sectors
 because
computer
education
 more necessary in
moder era
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the modern era
modern era
 for business purposes and every field like bank
,
Accept space
,
 hospital many more
Moreover
, nowadays many software
update
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updates
 which are helpful for people to communicate with other nations people. Because of
this
 they know different languages and cultures
On the other hand
,
computer
 leading to
negatives
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negative
points
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points, firstly
firstly
 children not use
computer
 for study purpose sometimes they commit cyber crime which is not good for them.
Secondly they
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Secondly, they
are faced many
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are faced with many
 health related problems,
for instance
 obesity.
Finally
 children most of the spent on
computer
 games which ef
fects on their
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a child's education
child's education
children's education
education
 To sum up, I retreat my opinion
computer
 play pivotal role in children
education
 in
this
 modern era which is helpful for the better development of any nation
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