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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#communications #it’s #letters
Previously, people liked to communicate with their loved ones by writing long letters.
However
, now a days it is quite easy to talk to people
live
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living
 in abroad country or in different cities of a country. According to me, modern
communication
save
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saves
 the time of people. Now, we can share memorable moments with our family members, who lives in abroad via WhatsApp or
skype
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Skype
. We can easily share any good or bad news
then
 and there by video call. And via video call people don’t feel that they are far from the
family but just they
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family, but they just
family but they just
 cannot feel each other.
However
, People used to write long letters
to ask
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asking
 about the
person
lives
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live
 in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 country and inform about any good or bad by writing long letters.
Secondly
, if we talk about formal letters. It is still necessary to write
letter
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letters
 when you are talking to a formal
person
 like, a Manager, owner of a firm etc.
although
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Although
 email has taken the place of
letter but
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the letter, but
the letter but
 still in email
also
 we write our matter in
form
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the form
 of
letter
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a letter
letters
. So, I
am disagree
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am disagreeing
disagree
have disagreed
 here that the modern
communication
 has taken the place of letters. We still write
letter
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letters
 when we talk to a formal
person
.
Therefore
, in some extent I
am agree
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agree
 with the modern
communication
techniques but
Accept comma addition
techniques, but
its
the thing named or in question
it
 goes only when we talk informally.
However
, if we are talking to a formal
person
 we have to use the traditional means of
communication
 like email or
letter
. Modern
communication
 makes life easy for family and friends.
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