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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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In recent years, the amount of waste has increased significantly.
Furthermore
, it may cause terrible consequences which are extremely challenging to tackle. For the reason that, governments have to take precautions to solve
this
 issue.
This
 essay will explore the reasons and recommend the possible solutions.
To begin
 with, nowadays, the quantity of junk has increased
as a result
 of crowded populations. To illustrate
this
,
last
 researches which are done by population and environment professionals shows that, in the most crowded cities, junk production is considerably higher than small terrors
as a result
 of excessive consumption.
Secondly
, there is another problem which is caused by the number of rubbish dumps. There are no enough available rubbish dumps to keep all
this
 trash. For some reason, people which are living in a
city
 think that, rubbish dumps have bad-looking and they do not fit into
city
 view. In order to deny
this
 view, these kinds of buildings have crucial effects on the
city
's protection against the pollution. These problems, which are enormously important for the
city
. It might be better to take precautions to tackle with both these issues.
Otherwise
, the
city
 will become much dirtier due to waste.
On the other hand
, there are some possible solutions which might be useful to tackle these issues
such
 as burning the lumber and allocate more money to campaigns which are trying to deal with those issues.
For instance
, some environmentalists support that, the most efficient way to reduce the amount of the trash is burning them. It is
also
 cheaper and healthier than other ways.
Moreover
, setting up or financially supporting some campaigns which are responsible with these issues is
also
 available.
Furthermore
, it would be
also
 helpful to give knowledge about the importance of
this
 hassle. In conclusion, dealing with that issue might be heavily hard. For the reason that, as I mentioned, it would be reasonable to take precautions.
Although
 those protections would not be useful in the present, at least those would be enough to deter people to be filthy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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