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You have arranged a meeting with a business partner. Unfortunately, you have to change the arrangements. Write a letter to your partner - Explain the new arrangements - Apologise for the changes - Explain the reasons why the changes were needed

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Dear Mr Dave, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I need to delay our already planned meeting for one week because it would not be
posiible
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possible
 for me to meet you on 20th January. Let me explain it in detail. Unfortunately, my uncle has died yesterday in
a
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 accident. His sudden death is quite a shock for our family. As you know he was living with me so guests are
comming
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coming
 to show condolence. I am really sorry, I would not be able to come
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decided
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 date. I hope that
next
 week I will be free to continue my official work. once again I
apologies
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 for the inconvenience
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. Please let me know if you would be free on 27th January. It would be suitable for me.
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