Some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Although

, in

this

year of

digitalization

the administration of digitalis for the treatment of certain heart disorders

digitalisation

, many believe that downloading fresh videos do not have a direct impact on artists while some yet think

this

has highly impacted the

music

production house.

This

essay will discuss both the views and present strong support for the notion that

music

producers are in

threat zone

Suggestion

the threat zone

due to the presence of free download apps and websites.

First

and foremost, un-paid version of mobile apps and websites are gaining popularity.

This

is because users or buyers for paid versions are attracted by

free user-friendly

Accept comma addition

free, user-friendly

apps like “Tube Mate” where they can download any stuff without any restrictions.

This

trend has raised a curiosity in youngsters and adults that harm the niche market of these industries.

For example

music

accessories like CD players, DVDs, home theatres are not in demand these days.

Consequently

this

acts as repercussions for

music

and film producers through financial loss due to decreasing numbers of paid-downloads and purchases.

However

, actors work on a contractual basis. Once the concept is ready, the artists do not have to do anything with the profit or loss the song has made. Will

this

mean actors do not have to bear any

consequences even

Accept comma addition

consequences, even

though

videos

Suggestion

the videos

are illegally downloaded? Well, it has been observed that their success or failure only evaluated by views, likes, comments, and shares on their videos.

For instance

, a South Indian actress gained fame overnight as the video was viral because of her eye-catching facial expressions.

Thus

, a character only gets judged on acting skill so they are not directly affected due to the marketing of their videos. In conclusion, while unethical download has drastically affected the

music

industry, I believe actors do not have to bear any consequences of

this

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

290 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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