some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. what is your opinion.

Modern technology has
entred
to come or go into
entered
each and every field
thesedays
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these days
. In the
future
, all jobs will be done by robots as
this
trend
incresing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
day by day that robots taking
place
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the place
of people in different jobs. I reckon that robots will
deffinitly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
replace the
humen
characteristic of humanity
human
hymen
humans
one day. To embark with, ample of reasons are there that
sport
the activity of providing for or maintaining by supplying with money or necessities
support
the view that in
future
jobs done by robots only.
Firstly
,
humen
an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
women
wants
more relaxation
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more relaxed
in life and avoid doing any type of work
,
Accept space
,
therefore
in upcoming period they ignore
there
of them or themselves
their
work and would hire robots to complete their tasks. To
ellustrate
clarify by giving an example of
illustrate
, remote control cars would be used and people just sit in cars and they no need to hire any driver to drive a car.
Addmitdly
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Admittedly
, in cutting edge era, no anyone has enthusiasm
to do
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doing
certain tasks due to unhealthy
lifestlye
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
lifestyle
, so people require robots to complete work as they will be unable to do anything due health issues that they confront in
future
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the future
as a result
of
incleasing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
pollution
.
Accept space
.
To conclude,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would like to say that in
future robots
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the future robots
definitly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
will take place of
human
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humans
a human
to do jobs.

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