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2. Children have to be educated, but they also have to be allowed to learn things for themselves. How realistic do you think this is?Write at least 250 words.

#children
I agree with the question statement because
although
 I believe that
education
 has always been essential for grooming a
child
, making them learn necessary patterns, skills, values and moulding their personality, but to me a
child
 might learn important
life
 skills by being exposed to the
world
 on his own. They might learn stress management, multitasking and flexibility more easily by taking things head on. On their own, in a rather carefree environment as compared to rigorous and constrained
education
 schedules. Obviously, though it must be noted that learning anything on their own must be under strict surveillance of an elder in order to filter anything bad.
Education
 nowadays is more restricted towards the theoretical side. Almost everything taught lacks the physical or real
world
 aspect of it.
Hence
, most people who learn strictly from an educational institution collapse when the
world
 gets tough around them. Their mental stability gets disturbed and they become more
anxious resulting
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anxious, resulting
 in a weaker human being. Most institutions lack mental and emotional
education
 which is essential for any
individuals
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individual
individual's
individuals'
 character grooming and making the individual upright and strong. And I believe that by facing the real
world
 on their own children can learn to adopt and accept failures and adversities better which will in turn make them a better and stronger intellectual.
Furthermore
, most children when educated are compassed to their parents or teachers liking. Their dreams and aspirations are aligned with their elders.
This
 practice is very common in
asia
the nations of the Asian continent collectively
Asia
.
This
 culture destroys the free wills and dreams that a
child
 might nurture had he
been left
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left
 on his own. I whole heartedly disown
this
 practice and believe that a
child
 must be allowed to groom and anchor his
life
 as he pleases.
Although
, his moral values and social behaviour must be closely
examined but
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examined, but
 his freedom should not be breached. Having said that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 want to conclude that a
child a
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child, a
child
,
although
 should be taught the customized
education
pattern but
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pattern, but
 he should be given liberty to explore the
life
 lessons on his own. He should be assisted, supported and directed towards the right ways, but it is absolutely necessary for a
child
 to learn
life
 essentials on his own which most of the educational institutions don't teach.

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