Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Moving to a new
country
can be quite challenging sometimes. Somehow, as the time goes by, most people will easily overcome the difficulties of learning foreign languages. I shall argue that those languages difficulties wouldn’t lead to some serious issues due to its advantages to develop each individual. Technology has made the practical issues more effectively and efficiently over the
last
several decades.
In other words
, the existence of technology nowadays solves many problems effortlessly. They have made it much easier to get information within a
second
. Take online translator
for example
, people who might not be able to speak and understand native
language
found
this
very convenient.
Therefore
, technology helps to mitigate
this
issue while it makes conversation enjoyable and prevent misunderstanding. Most of the 70% of the world population has at least a working knowledge of English. But in fact, English is not spoken widely in some
country
such
as Russia, Japan or China.
However
, learning foreign
language
also
means having the ability to gain new skills and can be beneficial. In China,
for example
, when we go to the market, it’s much easier to bargain using Chinese rather than speaking the international
language
such
as English.
Therefore
, learning foreign
language
in related
country
is actually easier. Beside that, if we hear a new
language
regularly, our brain will automatically pick it up. Every
country
or several specific places have it's own culture. People’s ability to learn new languages
also
enhance their knowledge, to learn new cultures because somehow
language
is complexly intertwined with culture.
For instance
, in some countries, especially in Indonesia, adolescent have to speak politely using the proper words to the elders. Since childhood, we have been taught by our parents and teacher to show respect. Through
language
,
this
behaviour makes people or immigrant able to integrate well. To conclude, many people believe that they can’t face the
language
barrier;
however
, in my opinion, not mastering the native
language
won’t be a big deal and haven’t provoked any serious social issues because I believe with the help of technology it’s making our lives easier, and most people can adapt to the new environment.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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