Some people say that shops should sell food made locally whenever possible than selling imported foods. Do you agree or disagree?

In my
opinion I
Accept comma addition
opinion, I
will agree
in
Suggestion
on
some terms, basically because what most people look nowadays is to
impulse
compel to behave in a certain way
impose
and increase local economy and
this
can just be
succesfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
successfully
if we as citizens support our local brands and products above imported ones.
For example
: Buying local products, consuming local brands, recommend to other people or friends these products so our local economy can grow.
Also I
Accept comma addition
Also, I
dont
do not
don't
completely agree in not buying imported food because nowadays we are worldwide connected and it would be naive to think that nobody consume international products because it
doesnt
does not
doesn't
happen that, we need to be open to compare
also
different type of products with similar or different quality to ours,
also
this
will make that local companies be more competitive.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Improve your writing score in 2 weeks
After you write your essay, you will be provided with tips with examples of how to make your essay better in order to get a score above 7.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

What to do next:
Look at other essays:
The best new way to check your essay
Instantly see mistakes you've made and learn how to avoid them.