Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, the lifestyle of famous celebrities

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significant influence on growing kids. Some people belonging to a particular school of thought opine that showcasing celebrities in the media affect children negatively. In my opinion, I vehemently agree with

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view because bad lifestyles portrayed by these celebrities could give kids the wrong information and children could

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lose focus on their education.

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with, exhibiting all forms of celebrity lifestyles on the media could potentially have a bad effect on youngsters because when these performers engage in various sorts of bad

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like smoking, violence and indecent dressing, kids pick it up.

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is because children are not yet cognitively and psychologically matured enough to sieve information in order to do away with the wrong ones.

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, youngsters are more prone to copy the different ways by which these artists live because they ignorantly adore them

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of always catching a glimpse of them all over the media. In a similar

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strongly support the notion that the little ones get detrimentally influenced

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of always seeing popular actors on the television because

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could lead to children prioritizing popularity over academics. When children constantly see celebrities on the media, they may start to believe that the most important thing for an individual to achieve is

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would mean always appearing

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, a researcher in a children's institute

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America revealed that 80% of children when interviewed, saw no need for education because they believed that it won't make them famous. From the aforementioned illustration, it is apparent that the media visibility of celebrities nowadays is a bad influence on growing children. To conclude, some individuals suggest that covering

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the lifestyles

of celebrities for media purposes can be detrimental to children. I fundamentally agree with

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stance because kids can get the wrong message and

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, they may start doing poorly in their academics.