The first car appeared on British Roads in 1888. By the year 2015 there may be as many as 35 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Developments in transportation

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have led

to the widespread use of cars, bringing about major traffic congestion. Some people believe that there should be strong legislations to tackle

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problem and I concur that

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stand should be supported.

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essay will discuss the merits and demerits of curbing car ownership.

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, there are too many motorised vehicles on the road, leading to jams in the highway

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, therefore increasing

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increasing in the amount of travelling time.

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defeats the purpose of having a car as it was invented to improve convenience and decrease the time taken to travel to one's destination.

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, having too many cars on the road causes environmental pollution due to the exhaust fumes emitted from them. Not only is

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detrimental to our environment, it is

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extremely harmful to health and it could lead to health problems

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as asthma and

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inflammation of one of the paranasal sinuses

sinusitis

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, there are cars that do not pollute the environment and one

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example would be the hybrid car. They are eco-friendly and require lesser use of fossil fuels.

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, countries

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as Japan have started using electric and solar powered cars,

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reducing the dependency on a conventional petrol

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heated, driven, or produced by burning fuel

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vehicle. Cars are

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convenient as it allows you to travel anytime without the worry of missing the scheduled

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time

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that public transport has.

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, the economy is

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boosted in a way when more people purchase cars. To summarize, while there are developments to prevent the pollution caused by cars, I ultimately believe that road congestion is a serious problem and Governments should limit the amount of cars each household can own and develop a more comprehensive public transport network. Each family member need not own their own vehicle.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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288 words

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