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It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?

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It is argued that many people believe cruelty in the media is responsible for the increasing
offense
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offence
affluence
 rate among young adults. I am of the opinion that only media is not accountable for the rise of crime rate, and other contributing factors: the poor financial condition of the families, unstable mindsets, and the bad company of the teenagers.
This
 essay will discuss the causes and possible solutions to
this
 problem.
Although
 media
plays
Suggestion
play
 a significant role in building positive or negative personality traits of adolescents, juvenile's social interactions and impoverished backgrounds are the factors which cannot be overlooked.
For instance
, a child belonging to a family, who lives below the poverty line is compelled to start working and earn the livings.
This
 sense of deprivation sometimes urges him towards attempting misdeeds,
moreover
, a teenager who is encompassed by people involved in actions forbidden by the state contributes to ruining their lives.
However
, there is a famous saying that, "Empty minds often get
involve
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involved
 in wrongdoings". What if we come up with attainable remedies?
Firstly
, the government should start vocational training programs which will not only provide youngsters financial stability but,
also
 divert their attention.
Secondly
, there is a huge responsibility for parents to trace the activities of their children and restrict their usage of social media.
Last
 but not least, there is a need for an awareness campaign, whose purpose will be, to create maturity, so that our young adults will be aware while making friends. In conclusion, before declaring
media
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the media
 liable for destroying our generation, we should accept our
duties
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duty
; should start implementing things that could have a positive impact on our young ones.
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