Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

A number of individuals are of the opinion that fathers and mothers are responsible for ensuring their wards become good citizens while others are of the notion that teachers are responsible for

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. I am of the opinion that kids learn the

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the choicest or most essential or most vital part of some idea or experience

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of becoming responsible stewards from their parents. It is widely a common standpoint that

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should be held accountable for moral standards because parent often believe they are already paying for that service and

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that their wards spend more time in school.

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the earlier points are

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cogent, but

I disagree with individuals who neglect their social

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.

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, the

responsibility

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of wards becoming good stewards from another

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standpoint, clearly

highlights that a number of people understand that parents are saddled with

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Herculean

responsibility

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,

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is not an easy task, I agree with

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notion because a

child

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is more comfortable to instruction from parents and

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the implication

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of

the family name if a

child

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does not have proper upbringing. A young boy or girl is much

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more likely

ready to listen to his or parents because they are aware that a parent is responsible for their upkeep.

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, they should be responsible for

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teaching them their

good morals which will ensure they become responsible representatives of the family in the future. In conclusion a number of people tend to assign the

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of teaching children to be good

citizens to

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citizens, to

teachers while others think it is the

parents

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parent's

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responsibility but

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responsibility, but

I am of the opinion that parents should take up

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challenge because their

child

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will easily listen to his or her parent

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a

child

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with bad

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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will most likely bring shame to

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the parents

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