Politician's private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The Personal lives of political office holders should not be publicized. I believe very much that their privacy should be kept from the media.
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, I believe that their private lives should be respected because exposing their personal lives to the media will make people to be critical of them.
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, publishing an expensive car a public official drive.
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may result into negative reactions from the public; who may consider their lifestyles to be extravagant, which could distract them from serving the people as they will spend a lot of time trying to defend themselves.
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, Exposing their privacy in the tabloids could constitute a security risk to them and their families.
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, many people believe that public officers are wealthy, either through legitimate means of by stealing public funds.
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may put them and their families at greater risks of being attacked or kidnapped for ransoms. If
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happens, it destabilises their emotions and they are not able to deliver.
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, exposing what public servants do outside their official duties could open them up to vain glory which may make some of them struggle to keep up with public expectations
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leading to poor performance in office. E.g. A government officer
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seen as classy and trendy in his dressing may make it a duty to always look good because of what the reactions of the public may be if he dresses shabbily.
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may shift the focus of the official from the original expectation In conclusion, I strongly concur that the privacy of political office holders should be treated with dignity as they are humans and they deserve some respect.
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, I reason that government officials are entitled to their space and what they do with their lives outside their official duties should not be publicized as
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may be a source of distraction for them
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resulting in performances below expectations.
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