Over the past fifty years, international sports events such as Olympic games and world cup competition have played an increasing important role in our society. However, many people think such events are an enormous waste of money, time and effort. Do you agree?

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Some people believe that it is irrelevant to organise global events

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as the Olympics and they

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, say that it is not viable. I completely disagree with

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argument, as I believe that hosting

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events on a global scale will provide a fair share and

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, it can aid in sustaining the

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peace. Everyone should be given equal rights to participate, so they too can shine among powerful nations.

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, sports events

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as Olympics,

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cups can give all the nations around the

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an opportunity to compete and

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this

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can open doors for them to get the recognition they deserve.

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; Usain bolt

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known as the fastest man on earth was a Jamaican born,

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now the whole

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regards Jamaica as a country which produces some of the

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’s best and fastest athletes. If done with good intentions larger gatherings can always create peace between nations. To put differently, we have all seen the horrors of wars between nations and detrimental repercussions that comes along with them,

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an event

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as the Olympics can create unity between countries resulting in peace.

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; we observed and felt that the diplomatic ties between the USA and Russia is not firm,

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last

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Olympics held in Russia proved us

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and showed us that participants between these two countries coming together to win a peaceful war of gold medals. In conclusion, I believe that hosting events on a global level must be continued, as

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would help countries to build better diplomatic relationships.

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, it will

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give less powerful nations the opportunity to participate and the recognition.

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