some people believe that to be successful sportsperson, one needs to have a natural ability. Others think that hard work and practice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many ones argue that the body`s shape and inborn talent are far effective aspects
for
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of
a
person
to become a successful
person
in sports-related major.
However
, some other people are in
this
notion that the more time
one
devote
on
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to
practicing the more success will be occurred. Both views will be analysed, yet in my
perpective
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspective
prospective
hard working
outweight
beat through cleverness and wit
outwit
outweigh
outweighs
the other elements. On the
one
hand, the body`s abilities
has played
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have played
a vital role in
such
a physical
activities
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activity
.
One
of the
fundemental
serving as an essential component
fundamental
fundamentals
requiers
require as useful, just, or proper
requires
of each
sports
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sport
,
exept
take exception to
except
some specific
one
like chess, is
the strong
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the strongest
body due to the high energy
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interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
they need. To illustrate, the crucial require of the
valliball
a game in which two teams hit an inflated ball over a high net using their hands
volleyball
is to be a tall
person
. If
one
are
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is
short, the team will face difficulty
as
a result of problem
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a result of a problem
in
jumpping
the act of participating in an athletic competition in which you must jump
jumping
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
with
wish
that
person
have had
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has had
.
Moreover
, if an individual
can not
can not
cannot
endure the severe situation and long term of running, they cannot
develope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
throughout their sport`s time, so the physical aspects can be a
cheif
most important element
chief
chef
neccesity
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
for each
athlet
a person trained to compete in sports
athlete
outlet
.
On the other hand
, striving hard to obtain a goal is important in every
subjects
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subject
as well as sports. Without hard
working
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work
even high talent
person
cannot achieve the success
that is
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
they do not devote the
saficient
of a quantity that can fulfill a need or requirement but without being abundant
sufficient
amount of time on their practices. If ones have not the enough self-motivation on their field, they
can not
can not
cannot
stand the injuries and damages
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
will be
happened
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happening
.
Moreover
, the lack of responsibility that causes the lack of trying
prevent
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to prevent
the physical abilities of each
person
, so that their
mucels
black marine bivalves usually steamed in wine
mussels
masses
will not improve and their physical talents become a non-usage ability. To include, despite the high values and
effects
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the effects
of body`s shape, without practicing nothing will change and success will be far away, so that in my opinion the impacts of hard working are far
outweight
be heavier than
outweighed
outweigh
.
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