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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Agreed, Currently people used to talk multiple global
language
 in
this
 global. There are several countries in
this
 world
.
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.
 Each and every
country
having
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has
 their one or several national languages. Even though people
are belongs
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belonging
belong
 to same
country but
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country, but
 used to talk different languages.
Hence
 it will difficult to communicate between people inside the
country
 or
out side
beyond the boundary of; external to
outside
country
. Now a days because of
this
language
 issue
,
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,
 people are having different different communities and just surrounded between that community only and even though some people used have
avoid
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avoided
 or ignore other community people who used to talk different languages. Even
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 personally observed most of the time some disturbances have
happend
come to pass
happened
 between two different languages or different
communities people
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communities, people
 because of the
language
 issue and
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
 people are having difficulties in overseas countries due to unknown local
language
.
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.
For example
 a person
is belongs
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belongs
 to
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
end
 and he is able to understand multiple
language
 like Hindi, English and Urdu but when that person
travel
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travels
 to oversea
country
 for
a
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an
 official trip or vacation trip to Canada
.
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.
Then
 it is difficult for him to communicate over
their
in or at that place
there
 with his known
language
 and people used to talk in french
language
 in Canada
.
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.
 So it is very much difficult for him to manage over
their
in or at that place
there
 during his trip. As per my opinion
Engilish
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 is one common
language in all over
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language all over
 the world and most of the people used to communicate in
Engilish
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
language
 in multiple countries.
Hence
 people should choose to talk
Engilish
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 as a global
language
 in future so that each and every person can communicate with other people without hesitating within the
country
 and as well as outside
country
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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