Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neigbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, the popularity of doing unpaid community service has increased. There are several advantages of doing society
services
for teenage students
such
as developing their soft skills. This
essay agrees that community services
should be part of high school programmes.
Firstly
, students
can learn the responsibilities of teamwork. For example
, individuals sometimes have to work
together with
their colleagues at their work
and if they are bad at working as a team, they will struggle in their professional lives. In order to prevent that individuals should work
on improving the neighbourhoods, when they study at the high school and this
gives them an opportunity to understand what are teamwork and its responsibilities. Thus
, public services
have the advantage of teaching teamwork to young people.
Secondly
, they can understand what empathy
is and why it is so important, For instance
, empathy
is understanding other people's feelings like their own feelings and this
is crucial for relationships and public issues. If students
do charity work
or help their elders as a compulsory public service, they can understand the emotion of empathy
and this
is a chance for students
to be successful in the future. Therefore
, empathy
plays an essential role in people's lives.
In conclusion, the advantages of doing public service have some benefits for teenagers. It is clear that
community services
should be compulsory for high school students
because students
can improve their knowledge about science and literature but if they want to develop their soft skills, students
should do public services
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