In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.

It is often argued, children should start to do some paid jobs to get precious working knowledge and

experience

while others feel that it is entirely unacceptable.

This

essay believes that children should not do any

job at

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job, at

least during their initial 16years of their life and should be dedicated to their studies. Some would say that by working paid jobs, they will not only earn money, but the

experience

which helps them to choose their future career.

That is

to say that, by implementing that working

experience

child

can determine which degree course or business will be beneficial in the future to earn more money.

For example

, a recent survey found that in Pakistan around 10% of brick industry owners admit that, they used to work as a

labor

someone who works with their hands; someone engaged in manual labor

labourer

labour

in a brick factory as a

child

and made their mind to pursue the same business in adult life.

However

, I believe that

this

is a wrong approach, children's brains are very fertile, and

this

should be used for studies only not for work. While others believe that children should not permit to work because they shall have to complete their education

first

before to start any paid job. When a

child

begins working, their mind will divert from studies, and a chance of quitting will be highly likely;

therefore

, it will be difficult for a kid to go back to school.

For instance

, Cambridge University found in a recent survey; around 30% of boys and girls did not go back to school once started doing paid jobs at their young ages.

Therefore

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Therefore, this

this

essay believes that children should complete their education

first

. In conclusion, I believe,

although

getting a working

experience

earlier in life can be beneficial, but education should be the priority for every

child

in the world.