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The below chart gives information the data of immigration, emigration and net migration in UK between 1999 and 2008.

The below chart gives information the data of immigration, emigration and net migration in UK between 1999 and 2008.
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The line graph illustrates the
immigration
,
emigration
 and net
migration
 details in the
UK
 during the years 1999 to 2008.
Overall
, from initial to
final
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 the
immigration
 to
UK
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the UK
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 was more and those who emigrated
in
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to
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 the
UK
 were medium, but the net
migration
was
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apply
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always
in
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fluctuation. In 1999, the
immigration
 to
UK
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the UK
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 was around 460
thousand
 and
emigration
 was almost 200
thousand
,
while
 the net
migration
 was nearly 170
thousand
.
However
, there was a moderate rise in
immigration
,
emigration
 and net
migration
 from 2000 till 2002.
While
 in 2002, the former
has
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crossed 500
thousand
 and
emigration
has
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reached almost 360
thousand
, but the net
migration
 was around 150
thousand
.
Furthermore
, in 2004 the
immigration
 rate
has
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apply
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reached
to
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apply
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nearly 590
thousand
,
while
 there was a slight drop in
the
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apply
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emigration
, but the net
migration
has
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reached 250
thousand
.
However
, in a gap of 2 years,
immigration
 reached
to
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600
thousand
,
emigration
 to 400
thousand
 and net had dropped by 50
thousand
.
Similarly
, the fluctuation continued and by 2008 the
immigration
 was around 590
thousand
,
emigration
 crossed 410
thousand
 and net
migration
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had fallen
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fallen
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fell
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 to 170
thousand
.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words immigration, emigration, migration, uk, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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