The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise this information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts

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the proportion of

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consumption for 6 categories in an Australian household and the

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gas

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generated by them.

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, heating uses the most

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in an

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household though, water heating emits the most

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gas

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. Cooling generates the least amount of

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used the minimum. Heating uses 42% of the total

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and surprisingly emits nearly

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gas

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, water heating is

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consumption at 30% and contributes 32% in generating

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grenhouse

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gases, which is highest in the categories given. Another fascinating fact highlighted by the charts is the emission of

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gases by lighting appliances and refrigeration as they produce twice as much

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gases as the

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they consume.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Topic Vocabulary:

Average Australian household
Greenhouse gas emissions
Energy consumption
Activities
Heating
Cooling
Water heating
Appliances
Lighting
Standby
Percentage (%)
Consumption patterns
Efficiency
Emissions impact
Renewable energy
Energy-saving measures
Sustainability
Carbon footprint
Electricity
Natural gas
Emissions breakdown
Energy audit
Environmental impact
Conservation
Mitigation strategies

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