Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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With the increasing a number of vegetarians, whether or not ve
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a vegetarian diet
diet
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is healthy and can protect the
environment
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has become a widely debated topic. While many believe that ve
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a vegetarian diet
vegetarian diets
the vegetarian diet
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may avoid animal being killed, ot
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aintain that having
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and
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can maintain a balanced
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. Given that people is
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hich is reasonable for us to eat
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and
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and we can use other methods to help protect the
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, I believe eating
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and
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better than vegetarian.
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with, vegetarianism believed that ve
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a vegetarian diet
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can improve health and be moral for animals. When it comes to eating
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or
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, a number of steps are required before we can eat them. It ranges from catching to killing. Animals are shocked by electricity or are killed directly Somebody thinks that
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not moral (humane).
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, research shows that most of the an
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as plastic bags and metal wastes because of the pollutions. It can threaten people’s lives if we eat
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and
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frequently.
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, eating vegetables only can avoid the worries and concerns of in
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oxic materials into our bodies.
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, some people said that a balanced
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tend to be healthy. Humans are omnivorous. Vegetables, meats and fishes all can become
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for human. It will not be a balanced
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if we lack any type of th
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these foods
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.
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, it can cause health problem. Since different
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has different nu
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nutritional
alues, vegetables cannot totally replace meats and fishes., Vegetarians may need to eat other supplements to replace meats and fishes nutrition values.
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food, which
annot entirely replace meats and fishes. In my opinion, there are a lot of ways to protect the
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as well as having he
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a healthy diet
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.
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, when it comes to
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to protecting
he
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, we all know ‘3R’, which are reduce, recycle and reuse.
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, we can reduce using plastic bags. We can
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recycle pa
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paper
bottles and cans and reuse the clothes.
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, for having a healthy
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, we should follow the
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pyramid. Ac
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Actually, meat
meat
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and
fish
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are located at level three of the pyramid which is not carbohydrates. We can
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choose organic
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hich has less pesticide in order to be healthier. The most important thing is to choose legal slaughterhouse.
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, go
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the government
governments
hould implement laws to protect animal from being immorally treated and to provide standards of hygiene. These tactics help to ensure the sources and quality of the
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are safe. Having discussed that balanced
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is
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tends
has tended
is tending
o be healthy and there are a lot of ways to protect the
environment
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, I firmly believe that ve
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a vegetarian diet
diet
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is not the best choice.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Plant-based diet
  • Chronic diseases
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Deforestation
  • Water consumption
  • Mitigate climate change
  • Natural resources
  • Animal welfare
  • Humane and ethical choice
  • Healthcare costs
  • Sustainable farming
  • Legumes
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Vegetarian
  • Vegan
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