young people spend their free time in shopping malls. This has a negative effect on young people and society. To what extent do you agree?

The young people are increasingly spending their free

time

at the shopping mall rather than playing sports and music.

This

essay agrees that

this

is undoubtedly an inappropriate b

ehavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

and misuse of leisure

time

. That's because it encourages teenagers in excessive buying b

ehavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

and can lead to isolation and may develop mental illness. One of the significant harm of

this

habit is, it provokes youngsters to buy products which they rarely need. Many shops in malls are usually displaying eye-catching pictures and mannequins to attract consumers, which persuade the youngster to make unnecessary purchases.

For example

, recent research by the University of Alabama found that around 70% of young boys and girls spent their weekends in the Electronic market. They found out, approximately 50% of them ended up purchasing an expensive gadget like smartphones and laptops and paid electronically. Another disadvantage is, youngsters can quickly become withdrawn and isolated.

Instead

of going out for games, they started spending leisure

time

over weekdays and weekends in the shopping centres.

As a result

, youngsters become less socialized and more isolated, which negatively impacts their physical and mental health.

For instance

, a study was conducted by the British Medical Council revealed that adolescent with the habit of shopping spree has over 40% of incidence to develop depression later in life. In conclusion, I agree that an increasing trend of spending leisure

time

in the shopping mall by t

he young

Suggestion

younger

the younger

generation not only excites them to waste their m

oney but

Accept comma addition

money, but

also

responsible for making them isolated and sick in the future.