Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Now a day most of the tourists

are preferring

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prefer

visiting places where conditions are difficult,

such

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as Sahara desert or the Antartic than other visiting places like Buddhist Temple

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forts and beaches. Most of tourists

such

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as below 40 ages people are likes to visit hard situation destinies to explore more things and enjoy the adventure

trip

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Most of the tourists loved to

visiting

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visit

have visited

those places for more than weeks so that they will enjoy the same, love to stay at camp in night time during the

trip

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and most important is analysis more

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Now a

days

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day

most of the tourists capture the video of the entire

trip

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for the future

refference

a remark that calls attention to something or someone

reference

references

of friends and families during the

trip

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. Sometimes visitors face some difficulties due to

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advanture

a wild and exciting undertaking (not necessarily lawful)

adventure

trip

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and some of the people already lost their

life

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lives

during the

trip

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due to

nuture

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natural

nature

nurture

mature

disaster issue

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as landscaping, heavy

rain fall

water falling in drops from vapor condensed in the atmosphere

rainfall

and

earth quake

shaking and vibration at the surface of the earth resulting from underground movement along a fault plane or from volcanic activity

earthquake

. Apart from that, some of

tourist

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the tourist

having some critical health concerns and those men or female, faced sudden health issues during the campaign

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as health attack, Bone weakness and oxygen issues.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

breathtaking landscapes
unique ecosystems
sense of adventure
personal growth
indigenous cultures
environmental conservation
climate change
environmental degradation
economically disadvantaged areas
physical health
harsh weather
difficult terrain
limited access to medical facilities
fragile ecosystems
habitat destruction
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