Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Now a day most of the tourists
are preferring
Suggestion
prefer
visiting places where conditions are difficult,
such
as Sahara desert or the Antartic than other visiting places like Buddhist Temple
,
Accept space
,
forts and beaches. Most of tourists
such
as below 40 ages people are likes to visit hard situation destinies to explore more things and enjoy the adventure
trip
.
Accept space
.
Most of the tourists loved to
visiting
Suggestion
visit
have visited
those places for more than weeks so that they will enjoy the same, love to stay at camp in night time during the
trip
and most important is analysis more
.
Accept space
.
Now a
days
Suggestion
day
most of the tourists capture the video of the entire
trip
for the future
refference
a remark that calls attention to something or someone
reference
references
of friends and families during the
trip
. Sometimes visitors face some difficulties due to
this
advanture
a wild and exciting undertaking (not necessarily lawful)
adventure
trip
and some of the people already lost their
life
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lives
during the
trip
due to
nuture
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natural
nature
nurture
mature
disaster issue
such
as landscaping, heavy
rain fall
water falling in drops from vapor condensed in the atmosphere
rainfall
and
earth quake
shaking and vibration at the surface of the earth resulting from underground movement along a fault plane or from volcanic activity
earthquake
. Apart from that, some of
tourist
Suggestion
the tourist
having some critical health concerns and those men or female, faced sudden health issues during the campaign
such
as health attack, Bone weakness and oxygen issues.
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  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
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