The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been before. What do yo u think are the main causes of the difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap?

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While the rich countries of the world are getting richer, the poor countries are getting poorer to a level that the battle for survival is a non-ending routine way of life in some parts of the world.
Moreover
the gap is getting bigger in recent years. For various reasons the outcry for help is getting louder than ever before. Lack of education is the main cause of poverty and famine is most parts of developing and poor countries. Children
in
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of
school age are forced to work and get part in family income which is inadequate
otherwise
. In some parts of Africa and Asia children of age 7-12 are obliged to work in industries to help meet the family needs. There are some efforts from national governments to help their own people and from the international communities. The main way to help is to help improve the education of people. Giving just money and food are not the best ways. Education helps give people inadequate. Climate change or global warning is another problem that the poor nations are facing the most. As a consequence, dry summers and lack of rain in some parts of Africa
specially
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special
sub-Sahara African
are turning
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is turning
the area into a battlefield where domestic where domestic cattle are lying dead in their thousands and crops are not growing. Water shortage forced people to leave everything and move to areas where water every day to survive.
Moreover
torrential rains and
flooding take
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flooding, take
life and homes of many people in my home country of Afganistan. And the answer is to reduce the pollution or carbon emissions produced by factories mostly in rich countries, which will reduce the threat of natural disasters. As many poorer countries rely on their agriculture export products more than anything else, putting a ban or taxing
such
products will add to the poverty. The solution is
fair trade
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a fair trade
and take away the subsidies to
given
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give
to farmers in Europe and other western countries. In conclusion, it is wise to say that the whole world is a big giant family living together and the suffering of one will take the smile from the face of the other. Helping each other should be the main priority.
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