More and more are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work? What will be consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

Over the past few decades
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the farmers are shifting to urban areas
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leaving their villages and farmland for seeking good jobs.The rural people seem that living in
town
is
cozy
affected with madness or insanity
crazy
as well as earning money is possible effortlessly
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any time anywhere.
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in
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essay
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I intend to explore the sources of
this
problem
along with some possible solutions to it. Chief among the causes of
this
problem
is the movement of people from
village
to
town
not only reduce the farm production but
also
the food shortage.
As a result
the regime has to import food from other parts of the world.
Moreover
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moving to an urban area indiscriminately
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the
town
will become congested today or tomorrow.
Furthermore
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getting an apartment in an urban area has become
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solid, hence
hence
the residents have to count a large amount of money to pay the rent of
house
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the house
houses
a house
.
For example
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Although
my uncle used to live in a
village but
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village, but
recently he has shifted to the
city
, now it has become difficult for him to afford to pay the rent of house monthly.It is
noticeable
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noticed
that the price of vegetables in the
city
is higher than the
village
due to the huge consumer live in together. In order to resolve
this
problem
there are many steps that can be taken as
solution
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a solution
the solution
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the local government can provide modern facilities like
town
.
Moremore
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the local
councilor
a member of a council
councillor
councillors
can take some
realistic
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real
steps to upgrade the rural conditions.
Furthermore
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farmers in the villages are poor in communication and transportation system
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so they are not getting the fair value of their farm goods.
Hence
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the government immediately should ensure those facilities.
Consequently
, they would prefer to live in their
village
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For instance
, I heard that my grandfather was a successful
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farmer, but
he did not get his fair value of the products
as a result
one day he got angry and came to the
city
forever.
However
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if the villagers get good the opportunity of works as well as the salary is reasonable they will not intend to move to the
city
. In conclusion
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I believe that
this
is clearly a
problem
of
such
complexity that no solution is likely in the short term.
However
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the government should provide employment for the people of
village
like people of the
city
.

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