The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
The line graph illustrates three different
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of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
Overall
,
although
the figure for car theft and
robbery
is the same for the beginning and the end of the period, the number of incidents
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burglary
has decreased through the timeframe. In 2003, at the start of the period,
burglary
was the most committed crime,
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approximately 3500 incidents per
year
, followed by the figure for car theft, which stood at under 3000. And, the proportion of
robbery
taking place was very low, at just over 500 each
year
. By 2008, all three different areas of crime decreased. At
this
time, the rate of
burglary
declined significantly down to just over 1000 happenings per
year
. After 2008, these crimes started to take place very increasingly. In
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year
, 2009, the number of burglaries taking place was
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just about 1500. The proportion of stolen cars and
robbery
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was around 2700 and 600 respectively.
Then
, it increased for the following three years, except
burglary
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which remained the same until the end of the period. Surprisingly, in 2012, the figure for car theft and
robbery
was the same compared to 2003.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words robbery, burglary, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recorded
  • trends
  • criminal activity
  • categories
  • theft
  • assault
  • vandalism
  • graph
  • x-axis
  • y-axis
  • number of crimes
  • visual representation
  • changes
  • crime rates
  • fluctuating pattern
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