The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
The line graph illustrates three different
kind
of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
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kinds
Overall
, although
the figure for car theft and robbery
is the same for the beginning and the end of the period, the number of incidents for
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of
burglary
has decreased through the timeframe.
In 2003, at the start of the period, burglary
was the most committed crime, at
approximately 3500 incidents per Change preposition
with
year
, followed by the figure for car theft, which stood at under 3000. And, the proportion of robbery
taking place was very low, at just over 500 each year
. By 2008, all three different areas of crime decreased. At this
time, the rate of burglary
declined significantly down to just over 1000 happenings per year
.
After 2008, these crimes started to take place very increasingly. In following
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the following
year
, 2009, the number of burglaries taking place was at
just about 1500. The proportion of stolen cars and Change preposition
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robbery
was around 2700 and 600 respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
robberies
Then
, it increased for the following three years, except burglary
which remained the same until the end of the period. Surprisingly, in 2012, the figure for car theft and Change preposition
for burglary
robbery
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