«Prevention is better than cure». Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest into preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?
AS PER THE NATURE'S LAW, NO ONE HAS A CONTROL OVER ANYTHING AROUND THE WORLD.
NONETHELESS
, NOT RECOGNIZING AT EARLYER CAN BE EXPENSIVE Linking Words
CONSEQUENTLY
, THE HIGH COST OF RESEARCH AND CURING PROCEDURES. Linking Words
HENCE
, SOME FEEL THAT BETTER TO STOP AT EARLY THAN BEING LATE. Linking Words
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ESSAY WILL50 % CONCUR WITH THE ABOVE STATEMENT DUE TO VARIOUS REASONS AND Linking Words
SECONDLY
, DISCUSS THE IMPORTANCE OF PREVENTIVE WAYS. Linking Words
LASTLY
, THE REASONS BEHIND THE HUGE EXPENCE OF WHOLE PROCEDURE FROM START TO END AFTER INITIAL PERIOD.
ON THE ONE HAND, THE PRIME ESSENTIAL CONCERN OF TREATING THE DISEASE AT INITIAL PERIOD IS THE EXPENSE ASSOCIATED WITH IT. IT JUST COST THEM A PENY Linking Words
INSTEAD
OF LARGE AMOUNT OF MONEY. Linking Words
THIS
WIL DECLINE THE FINANCIAL BURDEN AND INDIVIDUAL CAN EFFORTLESSLY AFFORD THE TREATMENT. Linking Words
AS A RESULT
, THERE WOULD BE DROP IN THE NUMBER OF DEATHS AMONG HUMEN DUE TO THE MEDICAL PROBLEM. Linking Words
FOR EXAMPLE
, 90% OF GINGIVITIS CAN BE PREVENTED DUE TO THE PRIMIARY MEASURES TAKEN BY THE FOLKS IN THE SUBURB AREA AS THEY ARE EDUCATED AND HAVE CONCERN ABOUT THE HEALTHY LIFE.
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ON THE OTHER HAND
, INTERMIDIATE OR SEVERE DISEASES DEMAND THE NEWER TECHNOLOGY. BECAUSE, MACHIN'S PARTS ARE BEING IMPORTED FROM THE FOREIGN COUNTRY AND THEY TAKE CUISTOME CHARGE ALMOST DOUBLE OF THE ACTUAL RATE. Linking Words
HENCE
, THE MIDDLE CLASS AND IMPOVERISHED CIVILIAN OF TH DEVELOPING NATIONS COULD NOT AFFORD THE TREATEMENT. Linking Words
FOR INSTANCE
, AS PER THE INDIAN DATA OF THE THE MACHINS REPORTS REVEALED THAT THE BLOOD PRESSURE MACHINE IMPORT CHARGE IS ALMOST DOUBLE THAN ORIGINAL PRICE OF THE PRODUCT. Linking Words
THEREFORE
, THE RETAILD INCREASE THE PRICE DURING SELLING.
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HOWEVER
, TO RECOGNISE THE PROBLEM AS INITIAL STAGE NEEDS A FUNDAMENTAL INFORMATION ABOUT THE DISEASE Linking Words
THAT IS
LACK IN THE GENERAL CITIZENS. Linking Words
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PUT THEM TO UNINFORMED, AND THE DISEASE POGRESSED Linking Words
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AND REACHED TO Linking Words
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STAGE.
IN CONCLUSION, THE PREVENTION INDEED REDUCE THE TREATMENT COST IF RECONGNISED AT EARLY STAGE. Linking Words
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STEP REQUIRE THE AUHORITY SUPPORT AND INDIVIDUAL INTEREST OF BEING HELATHY. Linking Words
THUS
, I SUGGESTS, Linking Words
FIRST
MAKE FOLKS AWARE OF THE COMMON MEDICAL PROBLEN INFORM THEM ABOUT HOW TO INHIBIT THE Linking Words
FURTHER
DEVELOPMENT OF Linking Words
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DISEASES.Linking Words
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