• Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In the today’s world, there is an increasingly popular tendency that animals are used as the
experiment
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objects for new medicines and other
products
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product
testing. While some people are of the opinion that those experiments should be prohibited as it violates animal right
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and, is
immortal, some still hold the belief that animal testing should be maintained due to its benefits to human’s life. From my perspective, I find the former
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most agreeable
for several reasons. On the one hand, some people have their points to against animal testing. The
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reason worth mentioning is the fact that a medicine passed the
safety
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test on animal does not mean that it is one hundred percent safe for humans to use. It is obvious that each species has its own characteristics and gene;
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, different reactions on a specific medicine will be likely to happen. The
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argument is that animal testing is clearly cruel and dramatically violates animal rights. To be more specific, in most of the experiments, not only do animal have to suffer a deadly pain, but they are
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often killed. Another reason supporting a ban on animal testing is that it is costly to do experiments on animals, as it involves huge investments in state-of-the-art equipment, specialized laboratories, security and training cost for specialists. Clearly, creating an artificial body to do the tests on and developing Artificial Intelligent to analysis and evaluate the effectiveness and
safety
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of new medicines seem to be better choices in
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the long-term
.
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, it is reasonable to believe that animal testing should be maintained, due to its advantages.
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of all, it is undeniable that all medicines should be tested for side effects and
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reasons. In fact, at the present, doing experiments on animals is the only way to ensure that medicines are safe for humans to use.
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, humans should be prioritized over animals. Specifically, it is absolutely better for an animal to suffer, rather than a human to die, for the life-saving purpose.
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but not least, animal testing can help scientists and doctors find new treatments or ways to save lives.
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, by doing a lot of experiments on bats and rats, specialists were successful in developing a vaccine to effectively prevent humans from Ebola which killed millions of African people in 2015. In conclusion,
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it is immortal and expensive to do animal testing, medical experiments on animals for the
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and life-saving purposes should be kept running due to its irrefutable benefits to humanity.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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