Some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both sides.

Everyone does addition and multiplication in everyday life. So
this
is the example for the
mathematics
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mathematician
use
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user
. Currently mathematics had
became
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become
a vital subject in children's school life
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Many schools in almost every country teach basic mathematics to their students so that it will be helpful in day to day activities.
This
is what few parents believe in
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The subject gets more and more difficult as they go to higher grades.
This
helps the students be more analytical and solve problems easily.
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is skill is needed to all the common man in regardless to their job. The disadvantage is to some have very good skill other vocational subjects where the find mathematics is a nightmare
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This
so to improve their
grads
a body of students who are taught together
grades
in mathematics they put and extra
time which
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time, which
is not so useful for them in their career in that mean time if they used that time for some by birth skills they world have shined in their life and achieved a relatively higher position in which
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of them or themselves
their
master.
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